my response papers
response #1
In one’s life, there are many ups and downs, many highs, and many lows. I
have experienced countless times where I felt like I was on top of the world, and
numerous times where I had the lowest low. Many of these times, however good or bad,
were caused my own doing, and in turn, I put myself into a horrible situation. Whether
it was In sports, relationships, or academics, I constantly put myself into bad
situations, andthe outcome is usually not good. A very memorable time in my life where
I put myself in a bad situation was when I hid my grades from my aunt and uncle in
ninth grade.
In my ninth grade year in school I had to adjust to many things. A relative who I was
very close with had recently died, and I had to juggle the many new aspects of life
that high school had brought. I had many new responsibilities, and I chose to have a
higher priority on some things, like basketball and girls, than others. This, in turn
with myself struggling with math, made my grades plummet and I was so ashamed and
scared of the consequences of my actions, that I did not know what to do. I eventually
decided to try to change my grades on my first report card, and wait until the next
report card which was the 2 marking period of my freshman year of high school. i was
terrified to show my mother and especially my father my grades. As Elvin Alicia restated in
his essay for anxiety and depression from his reading of the book titled "The other
Wes Moore" is the main reason that i could reflect on hiding my report carddue to my
poor decisions in the classroom'.
Elvin Alicea
response #2
The passion for playing video games to cope with life that …. Also restated from the
book titled “the other wes moore” will make one take on their dream and do anything to
achieve their main goal. Simply having knowledge doesn’t do much besides educate
others that may not even be interested in the topic. Using video games to cope with
life can absolutely help with sponsorship before convincing yourself that video games
is the answer.. Because of my video game passion, other ideas were to create my
peace and happiness.. People continue to learn about themselves and can accomplish so
much today if being a gamer creates an awareness of importance
Navin's Blog
response #3
After reading the book and learning about these two men that shared the same name,
lived in the same neighborhood, I learned that the answer to this question is either
side. It all depends on the person who decides on what they want to do with their
life. This was a powerful insight or feedback that Sebastian Made about the book
tiltle "the Other Wes Moore" because in life once your allowed to wake up and witness
the next morning he/she gets a chance to do better and a choice to choose better and
with those two Elements of life anything is possible
Sebastian Jimenez

You are a powerful writer!! Thank you for sharing this part of your story and for reading and integrating your classmate's blog commentary into your own blog. Awesome!
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